Schnewitchen (schnewitchen) wrote in linguaphiles,
Schnewitchen
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English Help.

I was wondering if you could help me to correct the grammar/sense of some texts.
I'm making a personal project, Which needs to have some kind of poems,
While in my language they have sense, in english they seem to be horrific.

I'm not a native English speaker, so I will never have nice English,
But I have already involved a lot of people in this, because I thought I could do this on my own, Oh silly me!
I was being over confident in my abilities. This should teach me to be more humble!
Gah. Anyway.


My english sucks! One of the actors has already scold me, and I don't want to disappoint everyone else!
If someone could help me correct the grammar and sense of this texts I would be very very grateful forever.
I would as well as give you credit!
I don't have money unfortunately , everyone is donating their kind time to me
which Is why I want to make a good work.
So I could not pay you for your services, but I certainly would put you in the credits and be forever grateful!


Thanks!

V.2 - Edited 

http://privatepaste.com/915441da19

The text is here!
http://privatepaste.com/3ee8e6a1be

I apologize for the inconvenience and the awkwardness of the text!


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