eternalbluesky (eternalbluesky) wrote in linguaphiles,

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Basic French assistance, please?

Hello fellow linguaphiles. :) I'm attempting to legitimately learn French as of this year, although I've had a slew of bad teachers for the subject. I think I have the basic idea behind things (vocab, articles, reflexives, etc.), but I also know I'm sure to have some obvious mistakes (thank you, public education). I was assigned to write a couple of paragraphs about going through my day (hence, reflexives), and I would really appreciate it if someone who is fluent wouldn't mind reading through what I came up with and letting me know about nything glaringly wrong. xD Thank you so much if you can! I really hope I'll get better at this French thing, haha.

C’est le matin, ma mere ouvre la porte. Elle dit, “Lève-toi!” Je me lève de lit et je me lave le visage dans le salle de bains. Mes cheveux est grande, et je me coiffe il. Le petit dejeuner est un banan ou des cereals, avec un jus d’orange. Ensuite, je me dépêcher a la voiture. Mes frères sont petits, et ils sont bruyant dans la voiture. Plus tard a l’ecole, mes cours sont longes, mais mes amis faitent il amusant.
Apres ecole, je vais a la maison. C’est tranquille; je me détends et mange le dejeuner.
Ensuite, c’est l’heure pour mes devoirs. J’ai beaucoup devoir, et je ne suis pas fini jusqu’a le diner avec ma famille. Mes parents pose une questions sur nous jours. Le diner est bon; mes frères font les vaisselles. Apres cette, je vais au chambre. Je me déshabille pour me douche a 8hr. Je suis fatigue! Je lis un livre avant je me couche, aussi. La journée fut longue!

(Gah, I realize I'm missing some accents throughout this. I apologize for my computer's irritant nature. But yes, I do know where they go! xD I think I'll use this time to work on getting those suckers back...)

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