WM へ
こんにちは。
私は８月１日から８月１４日までWM亀戸の予約があります。
あの時の中に私の友達は郵便で私まで小包を送りたい。WM亀戸まで送ってもいいですか
Will that get my point across in any way, shape or fashion. And, if not, can anyone tell me how I can fix it? (There are going to be several packages. I'm moving back to the States, but if I can just get things to Tokyo I have people who can carry them back for me from there) Or even tell me how to fix it even if it does get my point across. My Japanese is bad, and that may be the best I can do, but I recognize that the message up there is very, very messed up even if it IS understandable.
But, anyway. I'm trying to simply inquire if I can get packages sent to me at the weekly hotel during my time staying there. The part about my friends is simply because I cannot think of a better way to word it. Indeed, I'll probably actually be sending the packages to myself the day I leave my current home city for Tokyo.
Thank you in advance for any help.