I'm writing a presentation letter in english for a scholarship. (Very short)
Would you please check it out and mark the language mistakes you find?
I am very pleased to support in any way I can XXX’s application for the scholarship you offer.
I have known XXX for the last 4 years, during which time she has successfully completed her degree in Foreign Languages at the University of YYY. Even though she majored in Chinese Language, she has always had a great interest in the German language. She has taken German laguage classes at the University of YYY and wishes to continue, because learning a new language would be very useful for her future career in the translation field.