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Does this make me sound strange? (A blurb about myself written in Chinese)

I recently joined a social networking site in the hopes of improving my ability to read and write in Chinese. I wrote a little something about myself for my profile and just need someone to look at it to see if my wording is correct, whether or not I've made any grammatical errors, any ways I could make it sound better, etc. It's supposed to sound casual, as if I was having a relaxed conversation with someone... So I just needed some feedback.
Thanks in advance!
-S

 

我应该好好地为大家介绍自己吧。。。 

我叫爽。女生。今年十七岁,还差两年就上大学了。以后想当动物医生或者法庭心理学家或者验尸官。不过。。。当一个普通的心理医生听着也蛮不错的啦。

我三岁出国了。到现在已经生活在四个不同的国家里。现在正在英国。会说三种语言。也学过法文。在开学还要学俄文。想到会感觉很兴奋。

我喜欢的东西包括:读书,做饭(烤蛋糕真的是一个完美的消遣阿!),画画,彩虹,阴天,下雨,和玩赏。

我不喜欢的东西呢。。。正常的人一般的不会坐在那里想让自己不快乐的事情所以我也就不提我不提它们了。

噢对了。。。我在学校从来没有学过中文。所以我的语文水平的确得是很差。

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