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Some Brief Yiddish Questions

I've written a novel and am now steaming through a rewrite. I'm using Yiddish for flavor on four occasions in four different chapters when a Gentile character interacts with some Hasidim. I want to make sure my syntax is correct when used within the context of English, as this is written from the perspective of the Gentile character who knows something of the Hasidic world.

Here are the four sentences (these do not appear together):

The men seemed to be wondering what business this shegetz had with their revered rabbi.

He smiled and his clouded eyes were at once kind and judgmental, as if pitying this unredeemable goyei heathen.

He was awkward, the stereotypical nebbish in the court of the goyisher goddess.

She shot him a nervous, shy smile, as if fearful of this curious shegetz, and slipped from the room.


So, have I made any errors here?

Thanks!
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