Here are the four sentences (these do not appear together):
The men seemed to be wondering what business this shegetz had with their revered rabbi.
He smiled and his clouded eyes were at once kind and judgmental, as if pitying this unredeemable goyei heathen.
He was awkward, the stereotypical nebbish in the court of the goyisher goddess.
She shot him a nervous, shy smile, as if fearful of this curious shegetz, and slipped from the room.
So, have I made any errors here?